Hmm, I don't know how to review this one. I am not quite sure what exactly went wrong either. Maybe it was just that I was expecting more? It was a fun, quick read, and I guess I was just expecting more humor, but I just didn't find it THAT funny and the humor was supposed to make up for the cliche'd story. It was all pretty typical, the language was quite crass but it worked here. The sex I think was a bit exaggerated in my opinion, but it was needed in this case for the story to be what it is. Ultimately, it wasn't that the story was bad or anything, I did enjoy it but I just wanted more out of it.